Tuesday, May 28, 2013

Desire 5




 Note: so...I know it's short...
but it's better than nothing, right?
 Chapter 5:


 “Those sweet lips. My, oh my, I could kiss those lips all night long.

Good things come to those who wait.”
―Jess-c Scott










 Before reading: you have to know:
if khushi and Arnav are talking and behaving like this with each other...it's because they know very well each other, since five years...
imagine that during those five years...they just communicate with their eyes and if they talk with each other, they tallk only to fight like you saw in the first chapters...it's complicated...maybe, but, it's like that with the-crazy-girl
happy reading!
I hope that you all are mature here...mouahhh





Arnav stops to look at her. Actually, he doesn’t want to make love to her, he doesn’t want to have sex with her like any man does with a woman he desires, since many years…
Arnav singh Raizada doesn’t look like other men!
Arnav singh Raizada is unique!
Arnav singh Raizada can has all what he wants, when he wants, where he wants!
But!
It becomes complicated with Khushi Kumari Gupta!
He looks at her…
Like to be sure again…
She’s there…
She’s with him!
Under his control!
It’s egoist to think that he wanted her, for only him, forever, without knowing the reason!
She’s not his type!
She’s…
Sometimes when she looked at him with those challenging eyes…he could confirm that he hates her, from the bottom of his heart…
No one dares to look at him that way…
And no one…but her…knew how to provoke him, provoke both: his anger and his desire…
She looked at his eyes, they are not chocolate anymore, they darken all of a sudden and he looks at her lips…her lips, GOD!...just by seeing them, his lips are going dry and he has to lick them…
She took a breath…a deep one…
Her whole body comes up and then down…slowly and intensively that it has not gone unnoticed by him…
He looks down; again, to see the woman he WANTS the more!
The woman he’d always want!
His hands are on her waist…
In this moment, he’s all thinking…his eyes getting darker by multitude of thoughts…Anger against himself, anger against the way he is, and his unknown, dark desire for her…
She seems to be, exactly, like him…
Lost in her thoughts…or just in his eyes…
She’s courageous, he knows it very well…
But he has to tell her, what he goanna do with her…
-khushi! I’m goanna Fuck u…(he marked a little pause and then continues) hard!
Like by miracle, despite of slapping him, hard, she felts some pain in her lower body…his voice, his way, his bitchy, violent sincerity did one thing inside her: it increases her desire…but she shocked….her lips are opened naturally hearing that…from him…
-don’t push me to do something really bad to this mouth, khushi!
He said huskily but firmly and she doesn’t understand anything…she’s little numb…
Something bad to her mouth???
-close it!
He said firmly…
And she immediately, closes her mouth but her eyes are widely opened…
-you’re shocked?
-yes, I’m in your bed but…
-but?
-you haven’t any right on me!...you…you can’t (she hesitates and her voice is now like a whisper)…you can’t fuck me!
She becomes as red as crimson…while she looks here and there…avoiding his intense gaze...
-I’m unable to do something else to you but that, khushi!
He answers looking straight on her eyes…little amused that his word "fuck" becomes more scandalous pronouncing by her …and even sexier…
-we could just make love…
She said hesitated…but it was looking like this conversation is natural and even it has to have place years back…
His heart skipped a bit…
-love? You want just to make love with me?
He imagined that she hates him, totally and that he’s forcing her in the whole proceed and here….she wants to make love with him…Really?
-I don’t think “making love” is an appropriate word for us, Khushi…I know very well…your emotions towards me!...but we are here…two adults, consenting and matures…we couldn’t ignore the fact that…we should do this, now!...you agree, with me?
She bitted her lower lip…
She looks at him and nodded…
-so?
He’s asking her permission to F**** her!
It’s too much! Don’t he think?
Not romantic at all!
He’s really arrogant and that’s very good that he knows very well her emotions towards him…she hates him the more and she’s the one able and so ready to fuck him, right now!
Cupping his face, she hesitates a lot before taking his lips…hard…
Her lips are shivering…
She felt all cold…
And he was so warm…
She wanted that warm of his perfect body on her…she comes closer…and he welcomed her…after some seconds for him to accept the idea that she’s the one coming to him…
she's under him but while kissing him, she gets up...her arms hugging his neck...
As a plume he lifted her in between his arms…while she still kissing him…he sits down on the middle of the bed and she sitting on his knees while her legs are encircling his slims waist…
No one wants really to stop that…
Stop that? Why? She thought…she can’t…he’s irresistible…he’s…yummy…he’s so yummy…she is so close...oh God!...she could feel him in between her legs all hard…it's confusing and strange...
Because of her…
She’s affecting him??? Oh My Goodness!
She’s the one pulling out of the kiss…also hardly and violently…
He’s becoming numb, this time…
He looks at her…closing and opening his eyes instantly…
She’s able to destabilize the mental stability of ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA..woo!
-it’s not love!
She said, making things clear…
-let’s make things clear…I can’t love you!
She said all confident…
-that’s perfect!...me too!
He answers amused and closes her from him the more…
-I don’t and can’t love you khushi…but I want you…and I want you badly and it’s hard to handle more! It hurts!
he looks at her eyes...
she could know what he's talking about...
yes...
she's ready! 


Note: I need motivation, I feel like I'm losing my love to my writings and my FFs...I'm not talking about desire but about all my work...
I hate when the comment comes like "nice" or "nice update"
it even worst than not comment at all 
ok...maybe I will update this one soon, after reading your lovely comments
take care
:*

22 comments:

  1. readers who read ur love ur reading that's is ur motivation :)
    plzzz keep on writing :(
    OK.coming to.update
    wat a start and there conversation
    they both love each other
    but its complicate
    they think.they hate each other
    and their desire is out of love?
    and ending was superb
    it seems like cliff hanger: p

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  2. its really complicate..they admit to each other that they can't love each other???!!!!! but in same time they want and desire in equal fire... both of them..they are deny there love that what i see her..waiting for more my dear

    and please don't stop writing.. loved your stories

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  3. You are an amazing writer, pls keep writing.
    Awesome update. Beautifuly described their feelings for each other. Seems like they love each other but are not able to recognise it due to certain reasons which make them believe that they hate each other. Hope they realise their hate s just a misconcept.

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  4. ok some one catch me ...wut was that ..if their hate is like that wut will be if they r in love :D ;)
    was Awesome update and totally unique story .. will be waiting for more update dear .. plz try post it soon

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  5. ooh.....gosh both r equally stubborns .
    they want each other. they cant resist each other ,they even effect each other very badly
    but they wont admit it.
    plzzzzz......contu soon lkng 4wd 2 read more.

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  6. i love u n i love ur writing so stop saying that plzzz
    woooww they both is sooo AAAHHHHHH i can't believe their talk lol
    weird ppl ,,,,,eagerly waitinggg
    plz update soon

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  7. as you said it's complicate.they think it's just a desire qui rapproche them but not
    if they can read each other eyes that mean they communicate, they understand, they can talk just by an eye lock.that's we call it love.not hate note fake.
    yesh we can say the desire est plus fort coz of the 5 years they take to explose too much à supporter they are hungry to bit the lips the body the skin every palce dans le corps.
    for me i like this desire and complicate love because j'aime pas un love simple
    keep doing ma belle

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  8. Luved ur update
    ur a wonderful writer
    luvvvv all ur wrk pls dnt stop ryting
    ur ff's r the best & all stories r so unique nd worth reading!!!

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  9. loved the update.....
    she really has the guts.....
    she is not like the one she has been portrayed in other fics....i love her.....
    continue writing dear....waiting for more

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  10. crazy girl me katti with u :3 stop saying that ..u r a wonderful writer very talented one indeed.. We all luv ur work .. So dnt stop writing..
    Okay nw about this chapter .. Well .. -Desire- yes ,indeed it is the perfect name for this story.. whoa ! Their conversations r so Straightforward & bold..
    Characters r complicated bt i like the way u building up this story . And ofcourse want to read more and keep writing plz plz pretty plz ..
    Tc
    xoxo
    dsbj

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  11. plzzz keep on writing
    i have to admitted ur a wonderful writer
    love all ur wrk pls dnt stop writing
    ur ff's r the best & all stories r so unique nd worth reading!!!

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  12. Its me melihoney dear. ohhhhhhhh gosh u updated and thanks dear for this. they are insane for sure but i love them for what they are. hayeee passion, desire and everything for each other but not love hahahha, they are the best ever. I know they love each other but adament or ignoring the fact that they love each other.

    I love this ff to the core of my heart and i love u too meri jaan crazy. keep rocking

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  13. two complicated souls !
    omg their conversation was so intense
    khushi took the first step awwww
    so damn hot
    please update soon...we really appreciate your work :)
    (susfms1)

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  14. these two are so complicated and their priorities are so different from normal.

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  15. Awesome Update. Do update soon.

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  16. Nice update.. They both have fallen in love but yet to realize it, they are thinking that they hate each other and desire each other... Arnav wants to fuck her but Khushi wants to make love to him though she hates him. Both of them are so contrast to each other... but they want each other forever...

    Loved the way Arnav asked her permission to fuck her - I don’t think “making love” is an appropriate word for us, Khushi…I know very well…your emotions towards me!...but we are here…two adults, consenting and matures…we couldn’t ignore the fact that…we should do this, now!...you agree, with me?
    She hates him the more and she’s the one able and so ready to fuck him, right now!..Both of them confessed that they can't love each other but they want each other badly and can't resist. What a cliffhanger...I guess this is the first time they are going to sleep together in the past 5 years isn't it...and the next update would be damn hot and intimate one. Curious to know how you are going to transform their desires/hate into love.please update soon.

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  17. wonderful update...they are in love but they are too studborn to admit they love each other....
    both them said they can't love each other but they want each other....

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  18. both of them accepted that they don love each other,
    but its their need to satisfied their desire.
    waiting for next update,
    n don stop writing...
    i'm reading yur ff since Forced Marriage
    u r good writer.
    so don stop yur talent.

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  19. Awesome update loved it what they feel is more than love it's strong case of lust with a dash of passion and a chemistry that has both of them unsure in their feeling loved the update both want to yet BOTH afraid of the consequences that could follow amazing update

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  20. idk why but i felt a twinge of hurt when arnav said "i don't and love you" to khushi. i know she said said she can't but hell we all know thats a lie and we also know that arnav loves her too but it's just hard on a girl's heart

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  21. wow ..... its getting really interesting.

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