Friday, May 10, 2013

Desire 4

Hey Girls,
I'm upset

I know guys that this is the start and you're confused about the story
but...I don't know why when I invited 40 persons couldn't find them all commenting???
Again, I'm disapointed!

and I just don't want to this story to be read by silent readers who are rude enough to comment on blog that they want the link to this blog while they never comment before on any of my work...
it's just...
excuse me but...WHO ARE YOU?
I want to this story and this blog to be special but...
seems like I'm goanna stop this just like I stopped Love, sex and the city...
that moment, Please, don't blame me!...I will do it if it's necessary...I will stop all if I this day come when I couldn't feel any interest!
me, personally, if a work touch my heart will comment would it be in blog or in IF or in anything because I know what a writer needs...
Huuhhh
I said it all and now I'm ready to give you the update...
please excuse me if am rude
am I so much demanding?
don't know!
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Desire 4:

 Love is often gentle, desire always a rage.









Both know that it was too late to pull back…
It was too late to walk back…
Her scent dominated him…heart and mind…
He pinned her against the wall possessively…
All was calm around them…a pretty silent night…only their breathing...and the murmur of the breeze…
He holds her hand…their fingers crossed…like puzzles…completed…that was she felt the moment…he holds her hand while he paused his lips on her shoulder lightly…memorizing every single moment…his warm hot breath is burning her delicate skin…and she’s out of breath…she couldn’t neglect the fact that he’s the only man able to trouble all her senses…to put her emotions upset down and mess with her whole being…
How she wanted to plunge her fingers on his thick hair?
How she wanted to caress all over it?
And now…she has it all…her hand is caressing it like it was her usual daily habitude…
He looks up to her…
Not that he felt it strange that she’s caressing him that way…but…the softness of her touch like paralyzed him…
He remembered the way his own mum touched his hair that way when he’s feeling sick, upset, guilty…
with extra softness…khushi recreate that same touch…maternal touch…soft touch…
A moment of just gazing at each other lasts for like an eternity…
Their hands still on each other  like no one is ready to let off the other…while khushi’s other hand was still in his hair…not caressing but just there…
He’s tired, not physically but mentally…
He so wanted to just lay down…pause his head on her lap…close his eyes…let her fingers play on his hair till morning without speaking…without doing anything…
But he’s tired…
His desire for her is an ache…and he should treat it that moment…
His stomach is paining from that eagerness he’s feeling towards her…that need to touch every parcel of her being…
Some ache...
The desire made him blink…
He pulls her to him possessively…she gasped looking at him with questioning eyes…
The secret was: they could communicate with only their eyes…
No words needed!
He carried her…
She keeps looking straight in his eyes without any sign of dislike…but some fear…
The fear of the desire consuming her…
The toxicity of his proximity…
When he paused her in the bed…
She felt like a new bride but she’s not really shy…she’s more confused about the war which will take place, this moment, right there, in that bed…
She lost already her saree in their kissing session…but she doesn’t try once to hide her bare stomach…
Before him, she felt all naked with or without the saree…
He looks at her with a serious expression…he holds her hand and starts taking off her bangles…one after one…looking at how soft her hands are…how fine her fingers are…how beautiful was her polish nails…how perfect she’s in her simplicity…complicated simplicity…
She doesn’t know why that gesture affected her…the way he’s taking off all her bangles…and then come on the top of her…
Being careful that his all weight isn’t fully on her delicate body…he just leaned to kiss-burn her cheek with his warm lips…
Another peck on her other cheek comes slowly like a caress…
She tried to talk but his index touched her lips, pressed them…he was insisting to touch her lips that way, pressing them under his fingers…sensually…he parted them with his fingertip…looking at her eyes…next second, he leaned to kiss them possessively…
She moaned feeling him not only kissing her but sucking, beating, nibbling…beating them…he was like she imagined…Possessive, strong, unique…
A part inside her was surrounding to all this…
A part was guilty that all this has no name…
It’s not love…not a strong relationship…not friendship…in the contrary…all those five years all what they did is to make their cold war…he was always making her remember who she is and she was always challenging him, proving she’s not the one he thought she is…
She thought that she has her Master degree in the Journalism, just to challenge him as she’s able to do it all…to success at all!
She’s thinking that whatever she does in those five years are related to him somehow…she wanted to prove his opinion on her was wrong!
He’s her obsession! It becomes her mission…
And in this moment, this night…she couldn’t explain her behavior and seems like it’s the same for him…
He’s troubled too…she could feel…he’s breathing heavily…he’s losing it!
Arnav singh Raizada would never do that!
Being so close from someone…
That much close…
His both hands are now undoing her blouse from behind…
she wanted to talk…to deny but she lost her voice already…
she just admired that handsome man undressing, like it was in one of her dreams…
***
he wanted her to stop him…but she doesn’t!
not that he will stop if she will stop him…but at least then, he will try to control himself over her…
if she would protest, he would force her any way…
he’s not the kind of man unable to take his right!
Wait!
It’s not your right to make Love to Her!
no!
It’s just sex! Just sex!
Your hands are trembling just by the idea that next second you will cover her breasts instead of this black bra…and you still think it’s SEX???
Many girls were in your arms before and you weren’t able to feel anyone!
You didn’t wait for anyone for five years…
Die to touch her…
Breath to obtain this moment!
Live for this second…the second you will HAVE HER!
It takes long days…
That decision to kidnap her from the whole world…
Travel with her to this empty place!
To have her for you only!
To have her in your arms!
Yours…
No Woman succeeded to make him feel this way: blind possessiveness…strong passion…his desire for her…something he couldn’t describe…but could feel every second in his life!
She gasped the moment she felt his arousal against her thigh…
She looks up to him…like to be sure what she just felt is real…
And he’s really on the top of her…
ASR!
Why she couldn’t push him away and kill him!
Isn’t it that a form of forcing? Of violation?
Why she’s feeling only satisfaction?
Well when Him is just admiring your breasts that way…you should be satisfied Miss Gupta…
She felt beautiful in his eyes…
He’s like that all the time…
Harsh words
Expressive eyes
Dear God!
His eyes…
His eyes!
His I-want-to-Fuck-you gaze!
Direct!
Bare!
Severe!
Shameless!
Seductive!
She couldn't resist!
Proof…she’s under Him, now, in her two pieces underwears…not able to hide anything…as they are made made from transparent black lace…
***
he thought…from when she’s starting to wear those kind of lingerie?
And for whom?
And why?
And…
There is someone else in her life?
Why is it so sexy?
No one would see this? Why this taking care of this?
Arnav singh Raizada…she’s a girl…what she’s supposed to wear?
Something not as sexy as those pieces made to brought any man on his knees before her…
He knows her able to win anyone heart, mind and soul…
But he believes that he’s not ANYONE but he’s The ONE!
He believes she’s Untouchable and he will be the first to make this body sweat and beg for more…
The back of his fingertips travelled from her neck…slowly and softly…to reach her belly…he caressed her belly…his eyes now concentrating on only the way she’s breathing heavily and the way her little soft tummy is following that breath rhythm…that was cute but so damn hot…
What that skin would taste?
Taste heaven no doubt…
His lips gave an open mouth kiss to her belly button and the reaction was phenomenal…
Her whole body arched up trembling…
-aahh…
She screamed out…
He so liked that sound she’s making…he made a vow that no one would lose his mind tonight…
Lose it for real!
   


Note: why I stopped here?
it was kinda of punishement... :p
now, bye





















33 comments:

  1. Hot and amazing update dear I m going
    Too Mary on 27 may so I m very busy I can't comments regular but when I m free I will comments

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  2. loved it

    it's so damn hot and sexy

    both blind with desire

    both want to stop but they cant

    and loved their inner fight

    and ofcourse arnav possessive woowand so mush passion

    amazing update

    sorry didn't comment these days cuz my exams start

    but i will try to read and comment when i ever get a chance

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  3. u know wut ,, i just wanna kill u .. why u end it on that point !!! wut was that TO HOT and SEXY .. could feel the hotness ... this FF is really confusing but truly Amazing one dear .. plz post the next one soon will be waiting

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  4. haaaawwwww u stoped there grrrr shame on u lol
    i was just thinking hw i look silly with this smile on my face while i read ur update n hw magical u make me feel, its hard to say it in words lol sorry i am not the kind of person who can talk well but rly u make me lost in my dream land..

    but what u did miss crazy girl :O u just stoped there oh my poor heart damn it :p
    continue soon darling

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  5. it's a big punishement you did to me..
    you stopped at the very hot moment
    both swimming in there desire
    they can't hold on that much
    now that there bodys feel the softness and the warm of the ohter they can't pull back
    he want to tast here all from top to dow .she want to feel his beart against here beast
    what a combinaison these 2 soul
    but at you crazy girl can't say anything when it come to every moment you describe it at such a way you make me dream and feel the scene thank you so much darling
    don't stop and i'm waiting for next update

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  6. amazing update my dear...and your punshiment is really big one ..:)
    i love this story darling like all your storis...so plzzz dont stop and update it...and take care...love you dear

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  7. Wonderful update....its damn hot yaar........
    why u stop there this is not fine...
    waiting for next update...
    update soon with more hot and sexy post.....

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  8. just one word 4 this work iz beautiful.
    u write every word of this story vid lots of love i can feel it between da lines ,
    its not just sex as arnve think its like bonding between 2 souls.
    no dout da this iz hot n sexy but 4 me this iz more then that.
    i can feel pure love n emotion behind lust n sex.
    plzz dont stop at this point .eagerly waiting 4 more.

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  9. AWESOME UPDATE BOTH BURNING IN THEIR DESIRE BOTH UNCONTROLLABLE YET BOTH DENYING THE BOTH BASIC WANTS LOVED THE UPDATE WICKED SEXY

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  10. why u gave this punishment...............oh no i have to wait till next update
    hm my brain is gng to burst pls update it soon......
    amazing update.......... wow both their desire are lovely........
    i loved it......

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  11. Hot update. Both their POVs are well written. Both of them are desiring for each other and are not able to resist each other. He anticipated her to stop him from being physically intimate, but she is giving in to him. His thoughts on from when , why and from whom she is wearing those transparent black lace lingerie, which is not hiding anything, thinking that there might be some one else in her life, and she is wearing that for that person, how can he think like that, can't a girl wear sexy lingerie just for herself & her comfort, pleasure etc. He feels he is the one and not anyone, and he has the right on her..
    They are still able to understand that behind all this desire, lust for each other in the past 5 years, is the love for each other.. yet to realize the same. I hope they do so soon.

    Regarding comments, I don't like to comment a one liner like nice update etc, I will be occasionally commenting, as I am a regular reader of your FFs like For my Angel, Unfaithful, Forced Marriage.. I normally stalk your blog for updates regularly and read the chapters. I hope you will bear with me. I would be more happy if you can provide the like button so that I can click on the same to express that I liked the update, when I don't comment.

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  12. wow...im speechless...the way u portrayed the characters were mind blowing...hat off for u...keep it up....will wait for ur updates.....
    i agree with reality truth...if hv like button will be much better

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  13. hey mind blowing update
    love love it awesome portrayal of the arnav and khushi
    amazing POVs for both awesomely written
    love the desire for each other
    can't wait to see what happens next
    update soon

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  14. yeayyyy finally u.updated this one
    plzzz dnt stop writing this one
    readerz she is right she wrote for us so y cant we comnt on.it
    so.keep comenting
    coming back to update
    itis lovely
    emotions beautifully written
    the part he remmber his mother was superb and emotional
    :)))))

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  15. omg they have such a strong history of 5 years !!!!. obviously it will be all so deep considering all of her acts in these 5 years were to irk him. cool. aww he remembered his mother.

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  16. Luved the update
    dat was surely a punishment 2 stop it :p
    bt anywayz waiting for the next part eagerly!!!

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  17. this punishment to too severe yaarr...:'(
    why finish it at this point ...
    it was so damn hot ...
    am still trying to know what kind of relationship they share that they are ready to submit themselves to one another ...what ever it is i just like it so much :P
    please dont stop this FF ..*puppy dog face* ... :'(((((

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  18. Awesome update. Liked reading both their pov. Both seem to lost in the web of desire. Loved him thinking that her touch was just like his mom. Again cliffhanger. Pls continue soon.
    About comments, sorry 4 being late, i had lost the link. Got this after searching many times. Now i ll be regular with comments.

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  19. wow......all i could say is just this.
    that is what i felt while reading the first chapter.
    i have been reading your stories since forced marriage. i am not that intelligent to judge you but i really feel the urge to write that your way of writing has changed......and the change is AMAZING!!!!
    you described it very well.....
    awesome storyline
    nice work...
    so arnav is gonna die.....both have a strong passion towards each other and now are finding a way to quench that thirst.....
    loved the way he felt his mother's touch in her. how he wanted to lie in her lap to get that warmth and caress.....
    their inner fight with themselved is described beautifully.......

    THANK YOU for inviting me to read this fabulous work of yours.........
    i loved it.....
    you left us in a cliff hanger?????
    continue soon dear.....

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  20. Finally got ur update and thank god for this, ooops sorrry thanks to u for this. that was really hot and i love how they speak with their eyes everytime and when are so close to each other even i felt goosebums all over my body. Very well written and i just can feel their emotions by ur wiritng itself.

    U r an amazing writer dear. love u so much dude and stay always blessed dear and take care.

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  21. Its me melihoney and the above comment is also mine.

    what u gonna stop writing this ff? pls meri jaan never do that pls. my fav. ff yaar pls and yes that would be my severe punishment for sure.

    pls dont stop writing. pls pls

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  22. oky i can't wait more plz update soon lool plz plz plz plzzz

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  23. my crazy if u dare to stop writing this ff m gonna kill u.,.....
    i love this ff.....
    so plz don't disappoint n continue......
    it was superb part.......
    OMG ASR dam affected by khushi.....
    her touch makes him forget everything..
    khushi is in inseparable desire.....
    as desire has hovered on her .....
    same as ASR he is also hovered by emotion...
    so they forget everything....
    so they r letting everything hpn....
    ASR wants to be her first...
    khushi wants him in every sense....
    but u stopped in wrong time yaar.....
    can't wait .....update soon......

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  24. Ya, that was sure a punishment :(
    Plz now you've to update soon cz I'm dying to know what will happen next.. Plz plz plz pretty plz.. Plz update..

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  25. Wt shall i write .. Wow ! wt an update .. Mind blowing .. It was damn hot ..luved dis story .. Dnt stop writting yaar plz.. u made my day girl ..
    And waiting for next update eagerly ..
    Tc
    xoxo
    dsbj

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  26. i am waiting 4 the next update plz make it soon

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  27. Babes update was totoally OMG.

    Do update soon

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  28. waiting for next part update soon crazy........

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  29. COME ON .. its be long long long long 10000000 long time ....plz post the next part soon dear

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  30. i wanted to request to u to write tis FF in left alignment,
    coz its kind of annoying to keep moving the scrollbar to left n right.
    but seems like u could read yur readers mind...thanks alot...n pls keep
    tis left alignment.

    tis was surely a hot update.....

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  31. this is soooo hot, too hot to handle but too cool to leave like it very much

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